Feedback and Changes

I received feedback from Glen Hoare and Hayley Kirovski

The main problems identified with my blog have been the word count, and referencing

The word count is something that I can work on, and achieve the desired result by changing my sentence structure and choice of words. At times my sentence structure is non-sensical, and perhaps a little lazy. By going back through my blog and cleaning up “messy” sentences, I can limit my word count, and make my blog a lot easier to follow

Referencing has been a thorn in my side throughout the Online Uni experience. I just cannot grasp the concept of the correct way of doing things. Either I get the reference list right, and in-text wrong, or vice-versa. I am working hard to make sure my referencing is as good as it can be, by constantly reviewing the APA Guide to Referencing, and trying to remember to indent my second line !!

I was pleased with my feedback, as both markers wrote that they enjoyed my blog, and thought it was full of information. Thankyou to both of you for making my blog that much better before submission

Blog_Rubric_Peer Marking for Josh Hayley

Blog_Rubric_Peer Marking for Josh